Business-to-Business (B2B) copy with DM thinking and Consumer flair

Randall Rensch, Freelance copywriter

Marketing Communication Concepts and Copywriting • New York City • 718-577-0005

Conceptual development —
Case: A waterless hand cleaner
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Full stop. We've gotten carried away. The "Finish... in XX seconds" line might be something to keep in mind for TV, but here it obscures our strong benefit message inside a strained exaggeration.

Maybe it will help to get back to basics. A tried-and-true demo...NEXT

 


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